ALL DONE

A Slice of Life tribute starring my granddaughter Micah, age 17 months.

First, a quick lesson in Micah-speak:

Hey Mama – standard greeting for anyone, female or male

Na na na na na na – a favorite song lyric

All done (usually accompanied by hand motions) – I’ve had enough

now, without further ado…

Hey Mama
Hey Mama

got my cup
can’t we get up
got no more water
betta change ya daughter

ALL DONE

Hey Mama
Hey Mama

tired of quesadilla
tired just to be ya
do grown-ups really see ya
countin’ one-two-three-yah

ALL DONE

Hey Mama
Hey Mama

books and toys galore
I just can’t, anymore
thinkin’ ’bout a snooze
but don’t you take my shoes

na na na na na na
na na na na na na

I’m ALL DONE

Girl, I am feeling it…

with thanks to Two Writing Teachers for the monthlong Slice of Life Story Challenge

and to so many fellow Slicers who kept me going
more than you ever knew


we’re all done
but only with the March challenge

not with writing
not with life


especially over here today

’cause my beautiful Micah
is coming over to play

Hey Mama
Hey Mama


we’ve only just begun

16 thoughts on “ALL DONE

    • Thank you, Amy, especially for hearing with your musical heart – music is Micah’s language, too. She adores it. A light-hearted and fun closeout to this challenge seemed in order, plus, these new photos are some of my favorites of her, ever. That girl! I’ve so enjoyed reading your slices and hearing your thoughts this month – it’s been a gift.

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  1. What a wonderful way to end the challenge! Micah is a cutie! Thanks for sharing your stories and thoughts. And thank you for reading and commenting this month (again). I feel like we really know each other. 💜 Well done on 31 days!!

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    • Thank you, dear other Fran, for celebrating this light-hearted moment with Micah and me. Every minute with her is one of celebration. It’s the great advantage and gift of being the grandmother – in my case, the advantage and gift of being Franna. 🙂

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  2. This needs to be published as a picture book for you to read to Micah! The repetition, the rhythm, the apt ending- it has got it all. Love the pics too. Thank you for your inspiring comments and slices, Fran. It’s been a great month with you!

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  3. Fran, the photos and the poem are both as precious as they can be. I love the rhyme and rhythm of your poem and the way that it flows. Those photos illustrate the poem perfectly, and she definitely has her Franna’s eyes. That last photo, though, they’re lying on the floor – all done! But I love how not with life and not with writing, which have just begun. Sweet!

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  4. Oh, Micah! That is so precious and beautiful. Thanks for sharing the key to Micah-speak. I love the photos that go along with it–“but don’t you take my shoes” That made me laugh aloud! “I’m ALL DONE” So fun! I hope you enjoyed your day with her.

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  5. How lovely is your final slice! A fitting end to another month of slicing. Micah is such a darling and she shines through your poem and photos with her wonderful carefree take on life. Good enough to ‘scrunchle’, that’s our family’s word for small people and animals that you just want to hug forever (not sure if it’s made up or not!) Thanks for another wonderful month of slicing and commenting!

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    • Thank you, Celia! Love the word “scrunchle” – it is perfect. I know you do this with your precious Jabari! Thank you for the joy of sharing words & ideas & hearts this month, also. Blessings to all-

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