He is shivering
before I can hear thunder
storm vibrations with
static electricity
send Dennis seeking solace
Burrowed in the clean towels
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Dachshund distress
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Poor fellow. Lovely verse and a heart-tugging photo. I am not a dog lover–except for dachshunds and pit bulls, for some reason. I enjoyed this post.
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Sometimes syllable counts constrain me and other times I need the structure. The tanka worked here pretty well; I couldn’t get it all in haiku! Of course I could have just written a paragraph but somehow conciseness was called for. Funny that of all the dogs you love dachshunds and pits; must be their personalities, for these breeds are loaded with character and infinite love. My oldest has a pit, Henry, who has his own category on the blog here. May be time for Henry to write again… stay tuned! And, as always, thank you.
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Awe, what a cute photo of Dennis! Great tanka and use of /s/ sounds!
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He’s a mess! Poor thing shivers terribly in storms; sometimes I wrap him in a blanket like a baby and hold him.
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I have been missing Dennis! I was going to ask you about him. I think you need to write a Dennis the Dachshund book! Really!
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That would be the most fun thing ever to write… I shall ponder it. Dennis KNOWS he’s the star of his own show!!
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