Today Cara Fortey invites teacher-poets to compose tankas for VerseLove on Ethical ELA. A tanka has thirty-one syllables and, in English, is usually arranged in five lines of 5/7/5/7/7. Cara offers the example of Harryette Mullin, who reduced the lines to three, for flexiblity of form. In honor of Mullin’s nature walks captured in tanka, Cara extends this invitation: “Write one or more of your own tankas in the style of Harryette Mullen. Take a walk, literally or imaginatively, and write what comes to you in three lines with 31 syllables.”
Mourning Walk
Last summer when I walked here
the fallow field at the end of the lane opened up before me
an undulating sea of green
Long before I reached the shimmering expanse
I could feel the mystical, quivering aliveness
in the depths of the grasses
Infinitesimal orchestra, vast insect choir
assembled in its tabernacle, offering lifesong
to all the Earth
Today, I stand here in memoriam
for the field is no more, shorn of its green tresses
its body ravaged by bulldozers
An unseasonably cold wind
whips with knife-shivering emptiness
even doves, high on the power lines, bear silent witness
